Outstanding! You’ve turned a simple character into something special. I love the strong gesture line leading from the torso down to her left leg, which guides the viewer and adds motion. You’ve also used a 3-point lighting system to stunning effect: a bright key light on her face and a strong rim light to contrast against the background. Add to that the implied apocalyptic story with the axe, gas mask and cracked road. You’ve captured exactly what this competition is about: Character.
User of Blender for 9+ years. I've written tutorials for 3d World Magazine and spoken at three Blender conferences. My goal is to help artists get employed in the industry by making training accessible and easy to understand. I'm an Aussie and I live in South Korea ;)